Now I'm not going to pretend like I'm an expert in anything having to do with comics, but I do know a wee bit about paneling. And by "a wee bit," I mean, "I know when I'm slightly confused." Those first 3 panels certainly must go in the correct order to make sense, but the way they are shown is a little confusing.
Thought I'd give you a little bit of... CONSTRUCTIVE criticism! (It's funny because it has to do with how the comic is constructed! LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL)
(Please don't laugh at that pun)